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Old 01-06-04, 07:58 PM   #22
Envied Talent
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From: Squint, See Me? Didn't Think So
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Punches= Doc Knock, They Actually Connected...Ocanti, Come Harder With Punches, They Were WWEEAAKK

Structure= Doc Knock, Your Lines Were Near The Same Length Every Time, Ocanti, Make You Lines The Same Length

Flow= Doc Knock, You Both Had Ok Flow. But Since Doc Had Betta Structure, His Flow Is Better..

Vocab= Didn't Really See Any

Multies= Didn't Really See Any

Ocanti= You Need To Work On Everything Badly. Punches Sucked, You Can Elevate, Structure Was Even Worse, And Flow Was Off. Fix Those And Throw Some Vocab IN Your Verse

Doc Knock= You Need To Work ON Everything Too, Just Not As Badly. Punches Were Decent, Structure Was Decent, Flow Was Decent Too. Throw Some Multies And Elevate

Overall= Doc Knock

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