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Old 01-06-04, 08:20 PM   #29
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aight...

casualty--
you had pretty good wordplay (miss cleo line, etc.) but you gotta have better punches. it seemed like you didnt really have anything to say...just kinda forcing rhymes and such. the insults gotta be better to win.

prophet--
pretty good verse, got some decent wordplay in there. the punches could have better, but the thing about there being nothing in his profile for personals was good. if the punches were a little better, this would have been an awesome verse.

vote: prophet

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