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Good battle Heres the break down...
777-
This is the time and place where the play balls comes down/
Smack this Bitch up so much he will turn into a circus clown/
^^Decent line opened well..but finished okie..
Kill rhymes....hell i spit halk venom in a every direction/
nigga is sex screwed he needs viagra to losen his erections/
^^That made me laugh..wittty....good line
The sad part is this bitch aint near colasol/
The only rhymes he be spitten is from his fucking nostrils/
^^ Good but kinda gay...Don't use the same word twice to start a sentance right after...but the finisher was good
i only layed out 6 fucking rhymes against this pussy/
Now everyone will wonder One More Time "whos the best EMCEE!"
^^ Didn't really like that line but it was a good punch with a doubt
Fuck that shit you aint no fucking Rashady...or slimshady/
In fact your a fake Food stamp passed down by generations like my grandfathers mashady/
^^Good personal and finish i liked that well done
Overall A pretty good verse hit pretty hard
ER-
You ain't a prophet, the very Idea is a gossip,
Look at his pic you can recognize him as a hobbit.
^^Great Opener, but the pic lines are gettin old...yet still witty
Your a living disorder, the equivalence of when mexicans cross the border,
Your lines make people smile, only cause they're similar to "can I take your order" (Works at Mc Donalds)
^^Played line...Good opener though...but that was shit...
Your a "Big Mack" you don't use a phone when your among us,
Cause when you call a girl, you're like christmas lights you get hung up,
^^Again another gay line..and simple...no creativeness nor witty
I'll deliver you a loss, but it won't be like digorno,
and clear your history like a little boy downloading porno,
^^Theres a decent line...and actually pretty witty...never seen that before
Actually you look like one of them hispanics riding them gay bikes, (sprite commercial)
It figures, you go on RB for "pictures"* cause you can't afford any of the pay-sites
^^ Good finisher but not anything over the bar
Over all my vote goes to 777...he had a better verse...hit harder and more creative and witty...nice try though
if you's could...hit up my battle against dw..it's on the bottom of this page or second thanks
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