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..Soft Focus..
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IP:
BombZ
Ya' streak stops here, commonly shreadin' flows like drunks who pop beer,
Guessin' you paused from fear, like your wins that remain, like stars in the air,
^^lol...good opener very witty...well done
You far from a star, cuz your flaws jaw me but I don't break,
Aint 'hard' enough to stop my wrath if you went through a 'stone age'
^^LOL...that was fuckin dope i have never heard that very creative
U spit n' low-range & still comin' at it but this losin' adict don't see how I end shit,
Runnin' in too 'big' of a strife cuz ya rap-game hides low in life like 'mid'gits,
^^midgets is played but you did use the line concept well
Rip ya' appendix, couldn't change the outcome of this if u wrote the admenments,
For life ya' sentenced ya' petty in damage so i'm intense,
You winnin' would be as lucky as OJ when announced innocent,
^^Good line...i liked that...well done finisher
Eki
Everyone stand back and watch how this bomb explodes
I am using Guns in this battle, hes fighting back with swords
^^Alright line didn't sound to creative...flowed good...
I know hes a fighter,but why is this kid in elevated- its wrong
he riched his limit, he couldnt get any highter, if hes lungs were a bong
^^not bad...didnt hit hard though
Joker Lyricists?less than two thirds of that name fit you just fine
............ Insane Joke , that should be your signature sighn.....................
Your obsessed with bombs, You like to hear things go bang and boom,
............dates back to your childhood..............
^^meh another okie punch
ever since you saw your sister BANGING your dad in your room
your signature has been the key, and now am gonna use it to finish your ass,
your medium weight? NAH! This has been a - Destruction of MASS. (fat boy)
^^good finisher...but thats about it
Overall Bombs came harder vote B
Yo it wont lemme poll vote ask a mod to fix that...sorry guys
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