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...Decent...
...Vocab Was Not Overwhelming, But A Few Mind Testing Words Would Not Hurt...
...As For Flow, I Can't Say. Because You May Have Wrote This To A Beat, And It Probably Is Different Than The One In My Head...
...I Saw One Real Metaphor But It Was Somewhat Played, The Guillotine Line...
...Ya Wordplay Was Nice, Likin' That Joker Line...
...Wording Could Be Better On The Heaven/Seven Bar...
...Other Than That, Good Shit...
...Keep Elevatin'...
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