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alright well personals way to write, ny came pretty weak in this, although theres not much ya can do in 8 lines...
flow again write, had good rhymes and structure, came together well----ny --Seeing Guns Makes Him Feel Hard-- was a pretty weak line, short and didnt go good with the line before it
vocab and wordplay not too much for vocab in there, but wordplay to mr write, id expect more from someone whos 51-8, but i guess not...
overall thsi battle was pretty much dominated by mr write, i dotn really know if envy wasnt trying or what.
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