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Old 01-07-04, 12:37 AM   #13
Telekinetic
Poetic Justice
 
Posts: 327
IP:

Paddy- your verse was very clever very creative punches and nice personals "This nigga raps for the X2 crew full of 'beginner rap' newbies,
I wouldn't audition for that shit EVEN to star in the movie"
That was dope
However your flow was off at times

Carson- I thought your verse was kinda weak, no real wit to it
You had some good multis and it flowed better
"Face it....paddy,u dug a hole to deep for ur'self an forgot the ladder
10 battles fatter, i guarantee he'll have an average like a major league batter"
nice closer thought that was clever

OVERALL- Paddy's verse just hit alot harder with the personals an all



I took time on your guys battle take some on mine please

This one is slept on bad
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103568

Heres another too
http://[url]http://www.rapbattl...threadid=104380[/url]

Thanks guys and good battle both of ya