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Old 01-07-04, 01:12 AM   #4
Telekinetic
Poetic Justice
 
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Krunch- You had a pretty good flow goin on. You need some meraphores in your shit compare something he does to somthing
EX. Kid killa your small to me like birds up in the tree
You invented wack now your back...... battlin me?
Not real good example but will do
You need puches somthin like that only be creative with them

Kid Killa- Most of your verse was pretty played but still you had punches and thats what wins battles
"Everybody come see this, King Crunch has been dethroned.//
Yo, when you wrote this BS rhyme you sure you wasn't stoned?//"
That was a desent personal

OVERALL-Kid took this one cause he had creative punches
Both gotta come harder tho

Good battle both of ya