...like ur sound...i aint feelin that cloud...dude...ahhh hes singing some more...hmm....u sing pretty coo...but i aint be knowin...er i dont know about that....quality is kinda ehhh....ur soundin coo...still soundin funny....i was peepin when angelz cry......the...the....lyrics...u kinda bit fab with the smile toothless shit...lyrics= wannabe mainstream type a shit....u sound coo...its a coo track...u could maybe get into it....but that dude...wtf???....yeh...new male counterpart=better song...
good job though...first time=alot of mistakes but still fufilling as fuck...keep at it...elavate...keep on singing and...uhh rapping...

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hey you!
your worthless like pre-owned autos...
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