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Old 01-07-04, 07:46 AM   #13
KaYNe
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From: England, UK
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I cant poll vote, but ima break it down for ya anyway.



Butcher, you had very few punches in this battle & the ones you did include were pretty weak. You talked way too much about yourself & wot u do to people which you from focusing on your opponent. Your flow was ok for most of the spit, but was off at points. Lack of metas, personals, wordplay..... but what you really need to work on is your punches.

Jab, that wasnt the greatest spit, but you did all that was needed. Punches were direct, although some werent that hard hitting. Personal was ok. Lacked metas & wordplay.
There was one only one MAJOR thing i saw wrong with the spit:
You a butcher without a sausage and i shud know...
^That line sounded gay

Vote: Jab



KaYNe -vs- Problem C
^ Could you do me a favour & drop a fair vote on this battle.