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Old 01-07-04, 10:24 AM   #7
Straight Ace
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Born to Kill
You started of well, the 'naked', bare concept..
U used to start off ur verse with, worked well i thought.
Creative n seemed like good punches to me.
From there u never really went down hill..
Consistant all the way through..pretty much every bar..
..contained a good punch or personal.
Which is obviously vital in a battle.
Overall Good, nice battle verse.

ILLunatic
It looks like u didnt put alot of effort into your verse..
Could be me, but ur verse lacked creativity & real punches,
or personals..n for exmaple the 'born this ill' line..
was very played...amongst others.
Your verse wasnt bad, not bad at all..just carried less..or
not enough punches to match Born to Kill's..
You kinda lost this cause of a lack of punches.
Overall Ok.

vote: Born to Kill