Thread: Wr!te'rs Block
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Old 01-07-04, 10:44 AM   #6
True-Souldja
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this was a decent piece, flow was sorta choppy but had some nice
meta's, some nice wordplay in there and your multi's are comin
along. I like the line about scatters in seven and ladders to
heaven line the best.
keep at it.
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