Thread: Wr!te'rs Block
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Old 01-07-04, 10:48 AM   #7
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hmmm

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your wordplay needs to be worked on and yo flow wasn't that good, an try to rhyme-or it sounds wack, but apart from that it was a nice piece 6.5/10
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