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Old 01-07-04, 01:37 PM   #3
Brendan
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Casulty:

Profit huh? Should have seen this come’n
Well? I see in your future a scared bitch runnin
good opener
I'll have you witnessing you own death like you swapped brains with Cleo(Tells the future)
with rhymes this lethal casualty will always remain unequalled
liked the first line, didn't like the second
You spit rhymes with lines that make P. Diddy crap shine
I could spit with no punches and you still couldnt touch mines
ok,nothing special
Hitting profit like a hallucination, its time you start facin
you couldnt be blazin if your rhymes were watched like star gazing
not feelin
I've mastered these forces, I smash you and leave you nauseous
fuck spittin heat, I spit flames like I'm equipped with torches
filler
I split wigs with axes, knockin you off your axis
with cannons blasting, proven anti-passive you'll be leaving in a casket
ehh

Verse started off strong but finsihed off kind of weak. Keep those punches coming up until the end and it would have been better.

Prophets verse:
look this is the part were everyone wonders who will win/
Stepping in this thread will get you erased before u start postin/
weak opener
Cuz im a lyrical genious on the mike and will rip you to bits/
Masterbaiting to porno movies called "Booties and tits"/
weak, corny, forced
But im about to make a murder scene and end this guys misery/
leaving the scene and people wonder if it was a bloody casualty/
ok
Turning this bitch inside out and ripping out his spinal cord/ jack in the box didnt even pop out once with a song for short/
nah
like me wondering how the hell im going against a lone stranger/
Leaving trails of blood from fights wit his icon "power ranger"/
I guess he changed his avatar now? This doesn't make sense but I won't hold it against Prophet because it may have before
including his sig. tells his whole truth and concepts/
Wondering how the hell he got banned for just postin nonsense/
nothign special
his bio is useless didnt find one trace of something i could use/
Must be someone that was born with abuse/didnt wanna reaveal his whole truce/
his whole truce? wtf? had potential but you blew it
Now its time to end this herb and end is damn misery and send him to hell/Might as well join him.....Im going there as well/
weak

I wasn't feeling Prophet here at all. I've seen much better from him. Casulty had a few punches at the beginning of his verse that connected and had a better opener and closer. Vote is for casulty