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Old 01-07-04, 01:54 PM   #15
Straight Ace
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Dialect
Pretty mediocre overall..
But then again u didnt need much to beat this kid..
You basically edged every catagory..
Better punches basically, include some more,
personals though. ok
Overall ok

Blackghost
..to simple.
add more complexity.
Your structure was ok..u just need to work on punches etc..
You'll get better. nice try.
Overall below average.

vote: Dialect