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Old 01-07-04, 04:06 PM   #17
Envied Talent
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Punches-=- Jab
Flow-=-Jab
Vocab-=-Jab
Structure-=-Jab
Multies-=- None Really
WordPlay-=-Jab

Jab's Verse-=- Work On It. Throw Harder Punches, If This Was A Battle Against A Vet And You Used That Verse, You'd Get Blown Out...Work ON Multies, Flow, And Structure. You Had Decent Wordplay...Elevate Son..

Butcher's Verse-=-ELEVATE. ELEVATE. ELEVATE. You Had WEAK Punches And OK Flow. Not One Thing Was Tight In Your Verse. Didnt Like IT. Had Nothing Special. Come Harder Next TIme Dogg. Elevate, You'll Get Good.

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