same opinion from me. butcher said nothing much of intererst, and his rhyming scheme seemd off key for the first few lines. i'm sure you'll do better with time though. (i've decided that encouragment is gonna help u more than the people that just straight diss you, cos that sereves no purpose but to make yourself feel good). i'd spend time workin on you're ryming schemes and punchlines. but then, what do i know. my lack of posts obviously menas i'm a newbie, and as we all seem to know, noobs don't know shit and have the iq of a 2 year old. that's teh immpression i got from some guy that turned me down for a battle just cos i didn't have enough posts. lack of posts seems to mean i'm not worth battling and am in fact scum. oh well. excuse the ranting, but i felt this was a good a place as any to let off some steam. maybe i should try and get my name changed to the crazy ranting guy or something. but yeah, even though my vote doesn't count, jab once again get's my vote. when u gonna battle me man?

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