this was a very decent drop, flowed nicely, your vocabulary is really nice, and it originality is good too. Good structure and good concept. only thing is maybe use some more multi's, but those dont really matter so decent drop bro.
Pz.

If you guys could hit up my battle which is bein slept on, thatd be appreciated.. thanks.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104597