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Old 01-07-04, 07:35 PM   #7
prophacyz
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These are your last words, there aint gonna be no doc_Knoc sequel
unlike 1 plus 1, us 2 aint equal
^nice line...good rhyme...not much of a punch though...3/10

I just robbed this win from you like lyrical criminals
my rhymes will have you see the light like biblical miracles
^good flow...again, not a very good punch...3/10

I elevated to excellence, been there, done that, and past it
I spit rhymes that'll burn your throat like Citrious Acid
^second line is good...like it...prolly the best one so far..first one...BLAH!...5/10

thinkin I wont attack you is like lightin a fire and expectin it not to burn
you checked in, thats it, now its your point of no return
^top line was aight...slightly played out though....second line was okay too...7/10

your better off with your cock in your hand
cause your just playin with yourself if you think our equality stands
^TERRIBLE!...BLAH!...1/10

Ima school you cause my punches come in courses
I'll burn you up with more rhymes then natural resources
those are two of the better lines...the second line better than the first...i'll give ya that one...6/10

the Freestyle God, my lyrical skill will never supside
cause when Jesus walked on water, I raced him to the other side
^yet another bible reference?...hmm...interesting...not very good, but hey...thats just me...4/10

overall-29/70
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