Ok check it...

"The ink well's dried up and with it my expression
And as I walk past I kick the full bucket of depression"

^ This line right here nicley done...nice word ussage....Kick the full bucket of depression...Nice...

"I'm in a parched pit where the ghouls that haunt the hour glass cant shift
So I dig with weakened wrist deep within myself.."

When I read this line I had an image of you actually doing this...which is a plus Nice....

"I forgot that paper and pen merge willingly, they need not be taught
So I reach in a drawer and meddle with a new sword
I snap the plastic case of the old and let the new run its cours"

Sick line reminds me when I draw....Yo fam excellent peace..and I rarely say a peace is excellent...

Flow wise on point expression wise on point...Great job diffenitly enjoyable...

Im like looking at others because Im droppin something soon you know the rule 3 links.....so I usually don't like readin others but you made my day by scriptin deep ish...


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