Dope...

Flow....perfect to the beat I got playing....

Vocab......who cares, you obviously used it well

Content...concept: Hot shit, i loved it,

Some of your words could have rearranged, nothing major, it was somewhere near the end of the last verse...not that important

I can't find much wrong with this peice

The complex get burdend with- a touch'd gift thas perminent/
I respect who deserves it- while most claim hiphop but have yet to learn it/..

^^^
Overall this gets a 9/10

Nice drop, link me to this track when it's up