"Perspectives of my lifes emotions constantly denied to believe
Declare everything normal as I choke everytime I try to breath"

Deep line..suffocation

"Constantly trying to fit in with a crowd attempt a regular smile
Say something rediculous as usual another case on my trial
Act hyper."

Nice flow and a good formated line...nice expression...

"Chases cupid out of my destiny a mans supose tobe fearless
Unprotected soul lost in the fog of a acid dynasty to erupt
I'll have another day to deny myself"

Well thought out line....Nice...


"I'll attack my life painting with a brush built for a storm.."

Nice artistic view...

Flow was there...Nice peice going back to your teenage year..
made me understand what you were going threw...
well done....

Laters..