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Old 01-08-04, 02:50 AM   #4
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yea Formula this was Good..ya Flow is Good Like always I enjoy Reading ya stuff......ya structure is Pretty Good Like Normaly...and ya Vocab was good and Helped the Imagery In My Head worked well with your Wordplay and Made this Piece Work in Ya rhyme scheme.......so all and all man this was Nice One Of the Betta Open Mics On RB..PeacE..
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