Hey Yo here is the deal with this one
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Open: Bloodymurder 6 Byond Pissed 3 you're dissing~my~lines before you seeing~me~rhyme yet/start kissing~my~ass coz you are missing~your~punch shit/

Punchlines: Bloodymuder 6 byond Pissed 4 when the only freestyle you did was typing shit on internet/
i'll wipe this poo with tissue out of Rap Battle's shit/

Metaphors: None

Flow: Bloodymurder 8 Byond Pissed 3

Structure: Byond Pissed 7 Bloodymuder 6

Overall: Bloody Murder 6.5 Byond Pissed 4