Likes:
structure - lines were close to the same length which made the structure good
flow - line length and structure was good which made for a nice flow

Dislikes:
Length - too short, not enough to see your true talent or to get interested in the piece
vocabulary - there were some good use of words but could of been more discriptive
rhyme scheme - there were lines that rhymed but some didn't at all, seeming as though they didn't even belong
complexity - peice was simple as though there wasn't much thought put into what you wrote

^constructive criticism...