Well...

I'm kinda torn here...

Both of you threw some really good verses.

I was really swept up in Largo's story...
Great imagery, great fucking flow.
Wasn't thrilled with the ending, though.
I was liking being back in medevil times...
But I appreciate the twist you gave, nonetheless.
Vocab and originality are to be commended.

At first I was pretty put off by this verse.
The constant use of the same word, slightly altered...
Made me think there wasn't much effort put into this...
But then as I got half way through it or so...
I saw and understood why you were doing it...
And thought, "wow, that's pretty dope".
Good verse, real nice use of vocab, flow was pretty tight.

Still, for the originality, but mostly for the story included...

I gotta throw to Largo.

By a tiny fuckin margin.

Props to both.

Peace

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