Yo, I'ma come thru wit a cocked nine an' loaded clip
.:K:. will be waltzin' ba wit a Playgirl an' a broken dick
^^^ehh...opener could've been stronger with better wording

Ya, this niggaz "Hooked"* on ma rhymes, he's addicted
On ma crack...or crack o' tha ass...I leave 'im word evicted
^^^first line, nice personal....second is okay

Ya gon' fall down, when ya fin' tha' G-1 merk'd ya, a dope vet
Then ya gon' crawl aroun', findin' male asses tha' get ya bone wet
^^^gay disses don't hit that hard, basically filler, 1st line good

33-15? Nigga, I ain' intimidated...ya don' rap wit precision
I'ma start a petition: "Is K fo real, o' is he jus' limited edition?"
^^^not bad...

Ma realness, an' tha faggots beefin wit X.L.G, ya fail ta see
Ya hopeless...ya won on d/r's...but tha way this is goin...

...jus' tell ya Dick Rydaz ta vote fo me....
^^^pretty good closer...helped your verse out a lot


K's verse

Just so i no i can merk your whole crew~this aint for battle hunger,
10 members to embariss~so ill start by merking your first number(one),
^^^nice opener
hell yeah man ill admit this will be good for a win~or two,
but after i beat there leader~how doya think that publisesez
your whole crew?,
^^^could have been stronger k
scared as a teen who's never had sex~not knowing whos next,
your not cing K clear~whilst its the sales you better buy some new specs,
^^^lol...haha...good good
im simular to rockets~the way im elavateing that fast,
thaught you fell in mud~till you relized K kicked your ass,
^^^wordplay was good, decent punch
your pussy verse and my hard shit bak~is hardly a fair xchange,
i started this shit of~got about 6 mc's behind my back~so a harcore match could be aranged.
^^^not really feeling this closer but it's not bad....

aight close battle....g1 you came pretty good, not a bad mc...too much filler in your verse though i think...eliminate that and stay at your opponent, will definitely do good....K, i've seen you drop a lot harder than this, it wasn't a bad verse but it wasn't a very strong one...overall i think k took it but barely...no hate ya'll, nice spit by both, gangsta one i wanna get a battle goin with you too....pm me...peace

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