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Old 01-08-04, 12:45 PM   #7
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both verses were enormously weak

King crunch- you had some played out lines... but at least you had some decent wordplay tossed in there.. your first 4 lines flowed pretty well i give that verse of yours a 2.5/10

bonespitter- you need to work on your structure some of your lines did not seem like they rhymed cuz the structure of your verse was a little bit off.. you didnt really have any hard hitting punchlines i give that verse of yours a 1.5/10

VOTE: both emcees came weak however king crunch had a little bit better wordplay the first four lines of his battle, though elementary, came out better than the shit that bonespittter typed up

i vote for king crunch.. both of yall should pick up a pen and a pad and work on your rhyme skills a little bit more
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