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Old 01-08-04, 01:07 PM   #4
Antonio Banderas
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Nice combination use of worplay in the last bar.....
For the most part, this writing seemed to be more of a poem though.....

U had one stretched bar, but the flow was still maintained in your verse. Also, the last bar didnt seem to rhyme, but I still think ya did good on this piece.


This battle is getting slept on, if ya get a chance could ya drop an honest votes here:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ntonio+banderas
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