Nice combination use of worplay in the last bar.....
For the most part, this writing seemed to be more of a poem though.....
U had one stretched bar, but the flow was still maintained in your verse. Also, the last bar didnt seem to rhyme, but I still think ya did good on this piece.
This battle is getting slept on, if ya get a chance could ya drop an honest votes here:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ntonio+banderas