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Old 01-08-04, 01:49 PM   #11
B.I.Detained
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Originally posted by Trapt Wit
God damnit....
When I say it doesnt need a breakdown it doesnt.
But here's one anyhow...
Jesus

hear M~M's Tight..so I'd Invite him to Collab on a Mix tape if I C Fit
but shit..
how cud I do a track w/ Sumone Who's not even worth the Skit...
Not a great concepts... seem partially stretched
Straight Deficit..M~M is jus a Man Made Defect...
..w/ less Respect..than Cam Protesting his Flipping Of Concepts
First line was a waste... second really doesnt connect well
Your small Rep'...defines Epitome..which Inturn is the Lowest Low
..Hoe..made Mystery's face to Green w/ Envy N still he Won't Go
This bar was really bad... I"m sorry... not good at all
M~M imitates Skilo..jus a Small Mother Fucker Reppin Twits End..
Ill Pop ya like AMEND..C Pills dont matter wen ya not Killin a Friend
Again with name dropping random people? still not a good punch
..so I Send..this Murdera on My Customised Herb Green Mile...
to the claims of MM being Sick..I Agree..but he aint nuttin but Bile
Sorry man I wasnt feeling this either

Overall this wasnt an elite worthy verse. Period

is on my nuts so hard if I jumped the bridge He'd Follow
So when I say you used to suck....................................
......................................I just mean that now u swallow
Not a great bar... the second line just doesnt wirk very well
See Brixton's Head is hollow and how could I admonish him...
When mentioning his name in a post is an accomplishment?!
Relatively filler bar here.... not saying much
shit is nonsense kid, & For the record ya post lacked a verse
B.I. took his skill to the extreme... and went from bad to worse!
Decent punch here... slightly played concept but used well as a presonal
BI.s never crafted a verse, that can stand tall, or cant fall...
and if I REALLY wanted to kick ur ass.......
................................................I' d just kick Cam in the balls!
Dope bar.... best of the battle........
And I'm appalled by ya lack of skill, bluntly - Brixton Is Running
And boy's room bathroom stalls is the only time The British r coming!
Not bad..... not good

Overall, not the best from M`M at all but still all quotable compared to BI's verse. As I said..... BI's verse does not belong in elite

Vote- M~M


ya such a fukin prick...
no bar was good???
talk shit mayne & thats why
ya got banned
now go
you're not on the list
HATER
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