Thread: Death Of Man???
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Old 01-08-04, 02:09 PM   #5
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'chest explodes in a furious dance'

one of the many quoteables in this piece, had a good concept, not too played, stayed on it..good vocab and structure, easy on the eye...dope.. if you add on it, it'll have more content though..and will be better...
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