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Old 01-08-04, 02:14 PM   #6
Hotdog
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Posts: 65
From: Scotland
Battle

IP:

Your nasty verse has just murdered the alphabet from A to Z//
your blind stares glares at my punchlines but cant see me//
I dont wanna be cold hearted but you and skill is far parted//
you could be a genius in real life but as soon as you try to bust a rhyme you get retarded//
this newbie tried to make a brilliant entrance but just stumbled through//
As soon as I touch my keyboard I have just lyricaly killed you//
you probably role and smoke up mold and fuzz just to get a raw buzz
sayin you a "never has been" is an understatement, your a "never was"
only if your daddy didn't go into the forest and masterbaited
dont pretend that you and smokey the bear aren't related
you spelt your name Brendan with 2 N's, I guess you aint really intellectual
everyone can bust cat in the hat rhymes, so dont act like you special
everyones elevatin in skill, I guess you lackin behind
I tried to describe your skill, but only "weak" came to mind
what your here still? I thought you got killed and reminded you aint ill
but hey, a blind man read your verse and thinks you got skill
my rhymes will murk you even If I just post one lette
just be yourself, cause it makes me look betterr
you now the king of internet shooters
He just registered, I see he found out they got internet on computers