U had some depth in this verse. However, the flow and structure seemed to be off.... U had a nice choice of words, but since the flow wasnt corresponding with the words, it threw the verse off somewhat... I still think ya did a good job on this, but work on the structure.....
if ya get a chance could ya drop an honest vote here:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ntonio+banderas