Nice battle...
Feelings after my first read, Smiley-face won. Lemme break it down a little..
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dude ill mentally and emotionally murder you and SPIT ROUNDS LACED WITH
enough ammunition to leave this BITCH CLOWNS FACE SPLIT,
your SHIT SOUNDS BASIC ,you woulnt be noticed running through a HICK TOWN PLACE WITH
your damn lyrics attached to the back of a poster of hali berry STRIPPED DOWN NAKED (lol.. damn!)
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Hella Multies... lol, nice punch too.... crazy ass comparison, but i like those.
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listen you talk real hard like you carry KNIFE STACKS AH TON
when you've really gotten SLICED, JACKED , TA JUMPED
you damn phony, your only real affiliation with the streets was your LIFE AS A BUM -lol
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Multies are gettin forced here, but good punch
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your the type to get smacked and get your jaw BROKIN IN HALF
your lyrics suck so bad, you wouldnt even make ja rules OPENING ACT
just face it bitch you have no TALENT MAN
your gay ass couldnt "drop bombs" even if your ghostwriter was in the TALIBAN
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First punch, decent. Second, very played, but it was iight here.
Overall, pretty good, nice read, good punches and good multies.
Next
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I said “good luck” cuz I wanna battle, and your askin if I “would fuck”
Leavin your “hood shook” im poppin nines u askin if you “should duck”
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Not hard hittin..... I understand you're callin him gay and dumb, but this shit lacks.
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Shit, you must be “krazy” to think such a bad emcee could blaze me
Shit son, you don’t even phase me, im prodigy, everyone tries to contemplate me
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Same as above, nothing hard here.
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I love seeing your grifriend in that blue thong
Cuz you been telling your crew that “getting jiggy wit it” was a new song
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This is just retarded. First line's complete filler, like you thought of the punch and just added the first line cuz blue thong rhymed with newsong.. Which is dumb because the punch isn't good...
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I am reppin the frist amendment ratified, you better hide
I leave political matters blind, cuz I got your skills 1000 times magnified
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Eh....
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I’m a criminal, cuz my tactics are pivotal
Inner state is subliminal, cuz my mic skills are cynical
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You're just rhyming without saying anything! No punch. Your mic skills are cynical? meaning they're negative?
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Coverin political syllables that make your tongue invert
My Lyrical “sting” hurts, I am beatin you wit “big words”
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hm... beating him with big words? nah.....
Overall, : ) Won.. It seemed like both of you were working for multies, and : ) won that battle. : ) had better punches... Didn't see a single personal, which is sad because you both could've worked something easily off the person's names { : ) and Casualty} Casualty, You were going for flow and rhyming, and yours did flow and rhyme well, but rather than worrying about the flow and stuff, you need to come up with some punches instead, because that will win you the battles....
So, Vote: : ) Smiley face
I can't poll vote yet, sorry, I hope you appreciate the feedback, though.
If ya could check out my battle Here it'd be appreciated.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...18&pagenumber=1