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Old 01-08-04, 04:55 PM   #5
Bio*Chemist
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From: -In My Lab-
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"The Hype, you took all Week To Write
You Feeble".....Funny on my open mic I had a similar verse two good minds think a like hmmmm...

"I could Drop The Wackest i can, put my Tactics In A Pitstop
.. And STILL destroy you, in EVERY Aspect Of Hip Hop .."

This line is pure heat....nice hit like you just slapped somone with words...

Overall nice concept ...I see you was lashing out..!!! which I like to do..

One critique don't use wack so much...
Flow scheme was definitly there...

Over all 8/10...Keep rippen heads...Oh and I would have appreaciated if you would have said more on my piece..


Laters....
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