this is really well executed....it shows emotion (the rage, the sadness), and its not personal at all! Most poetry people write is about their personal exeriances and shit that has happened to them, whereas this was about what's wrong with the world (usually an Open Mic standpoint) and it is still exceedingly dope.

The last stanza is what really got me. I know nine year olds that smoke weed, and chicks that lost their virginity before they were even in high school. It just hits really close to home. Great piece, tikkers.

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