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Old 01-08-04, 07:31 PM   #10
Derive
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hmmm, wasnt exactly something you'd expect in a heavyweight match but it is what it is....anyways lets get to voting...

Allegory: I doubt thats the original...pretty weak to steal his name but w/e, thats not a factor that would effect you in voting, i didnt really like your verse, had some nice parts but overall it was a type of verse you would see in FL or EFL.....

Feeble: Nice verse, not your best but your definately getting better, many wouldve expected more from you both but w/e, you had some nice personals and a nice verse, had some humor in it and it was more then enough to beat allegory

Vote-Feeble