damn this is a tough one...
on one hand u have cata_strophix who came with nice creativity...and dope vocab...and his rhymes were nicer..but then he had lines that just make me think 'what the fuck?'...here's an example
"I'm so ill that I WILL..."
^ you would THINK..that you'd explain what you 'will' do as the line continues..but you just put the dots and started on something new...I don't get it...lol
also your structure was all kinds of fucked up..u had excessive periods in places that made the lines look horrible...and ur flow was off...
u did have a few nice punchlines tho..I liked the line about rednecks in a eating contest...might be played tho....i've never seen it before tho...
ok on to Alias..
ur verse lacked complexity...subpar rhymes...but you made up for it with punches...."only shines through in his RB avator" was a nice line...I had to look at his avatar to understand it, but after that of course I got it...the james bond car line was gay though....
ur flow was nice...structure was nice too....
I gotta give it to catastrophix tho....he just had more nice punchlines...
vote- Catastrophix...
vote on my shit
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