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Old 01-08-04, 09:18 PM   #4
rule
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^^Un give an actual responce...he wrote something for you to read...you can atleast say a sentance.

Anyways

This was a good verse I thought. Youre right it did start off slow but picked up very quick. Your rhymes were good and some lines were really well worded. You brought this verse together nicely for not writting in a while. Good Drop.
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