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Quoted From BugZ-Bunny
yo kid tryin to confuse his names a diversion
like Tiki Barber fumblin his verse on a 2 point conversion
like old chuck taylors.... ya gettin kinda played...
got ya shoes cheap so less is what ya payed(payless)
i spit, ill shit, multis n punches the like to hit
my wordplay is fit, n your fake like Brit's, Tits(Britany Spears)
my verses come ill, while yours over the rim n spill
tryna shake my hand n missed, ya cant touch my skill
the dreams of future rappers i love to deminish
gun blast n u tripped at the start....
.....why even finish?
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Aight
Punches were decent
Personals were decent
Wordplay was ok
Flow was good
Structure was good
Overall.......12/20
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At 8 and 3, you decided to enter this battle so hastefully
C show you that your skill is all really just make believe
Ya structure is miserable, ya punchlines............invisible
Ya verse is just plain missable and my fists are hittin full
You copy and paste ya verse so you made a time limit
I'll still key up somethin ta serve and gladly shine winnin
I spit more heat than'a cookin' kitchen, I whoop and christin
This wack ass herb named Bugz-Bunny lookin like bitches
Can't you see dipshit? Ya weird ass Av isn't even legible,
I'd run wit ya flow but you slackin so mines is uncatchable
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Aight ...
Punches were decent
Personals were kinda weak
Wordplay was ok
Flow was good
Overall......10/20
Vote- BugZ-Bunny
His personals were a lil better
Made punches harder hitting
Both came pretty weak tho
Good structure tho..
ya'll on the right track
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