Nice drop from both

Pros: Both of you stayed on the topic real well. Sometimes when 2 or more ppl are collabin, the flow gets messed up going from one person to the other. But with this, it was as if it was written by one person. Real good flow from both. Pretty good wordplay from both, when it was used. I really enjoyed the "unexpected relatives" bar, nice similie.

Cons- I wish you both would have used more worplay, would have made it deeper. Also, in open mics, try avoidin ending lines w/ the sufix "sion".

Overall good piece, very much enjoyable to read. Respect and props to both, pz.

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