yea so i havent read Any of ya past pieces so i cant compare but ny was this piece was Nice man i dont know why your saying its not good but it flowed nicely Kept on ya topic so it was actually really good ya structure was pretty Good Ya Kept It Consistant...ya Wordplay was Pretty Good And i can tell waht your saying Because of it.....So all-n-all man this was a Pretty Nice Read.....PeacE OuT MaN.....