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yea man this was dope, realy dope....
flow lacked at a few moments, seemed forced.....but the best aspect of this peice was the description and the emotion, you had a well defined character with unique traits.....thats good writing. was a bit short tho man, if you woulda made it longer, more interesting story, with a few extra aspects to the character, this would be even doper
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good peice
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