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Old 01-09-04, 10:11 AM   #8
Born To Kill
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Bugz...
Lay off the multi's...
A few are dope to hear...
But when ya make that the main ingredient in ya verse...
Ya end up slackin on punches and wordplay.
Those are what will win you the majority of your battles.
Mostly the punches out of those two.

Dixie was pretty flawless here.
Mulititudes of personals and wordplay.
Nice sharp punches.
Slightly stretched lines, but not so it'd bother ya flow.
Overall, a clean cut merk.

Footnote: Bugz...you might wanna consider changing your name...
We've all watched the cartoon for years and years...
Personals against you from good slingas are gonna come pretty easy.

If ya name was Godzilla, same thing...

Godzilla's green with envy, cuz I gave his rhyme tha boot...
And you wear that costume well, cept you don't need tha fat suit.

See, could go on for days like that.

Peace
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