Basically you ripped a line from just three posts below yours..
Incorporated better vocab... then hoped for vets applause..
Like bad T.V.. you've got the flow all wrong..
Doing this shit..
......... After the break the viewers interest is gone..
Scrap the presentation? Like bees ya verse is dead after one-sting..
'Ironically'.. like ya name... it seems ya tryna prove somethin'..