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Old 01-09-04, 01:00 PM   #4
Baron Mynd
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^ Peepers isnt a newb .. Haha ..

This wasnt a bad piece actually, not the best ive read from you but it was cool. All the drug references were fucked up .. added to the imagery but got kinda pscyhed out as i read it. Content was good, flow was a little ehhh in some area's, but wasnt bad.
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The color of green, shown brightly around those two
The color of green, formed a crown around they’re hue
The color of green, also represented my passion lust
Jealousy towards my suave friend and his one night bust


dope the way it built up by repeating the first words in each line.

Nice shit Peeps.
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