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Old 01-09-04, 05:46 PM   #14
Solgooberdier
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flow-dan da
personals-dan da
complexity-dan da
punches-dan da
multies-tie....werent any


bloodymurder is a rookie, what you need kid is a flow and steady pace cause your style is wack. I read it and nothing rhymed or had rhythem and that the base to rapping. practise da

I see you wrote 3 styles right but while reading you cant get anyone of your verses in a rythem a smig of a bit.
OVERALL=DAN da
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