good drop by both.
enjoyed both stories.
Aus yours was deeper with more meaning. and more fucked up at the end.
Key- yours was pretty cool with a twist in the ending which I liked.


AUS..read your story liked the whole devil god thing even though It's been used before many times.the vocab was good flow good, not many flaws. all aroundgood.

Key..good too vocab was on point and multies were thorough.
and internal rhyming gave it a flare..but the stopry just didnt grab me as much. good twist but then again not good enough.


v/Aus.

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