E'yo..
Avatars Played out,Spit From tha Top Sick…I’m Origin-Ill
challenged me,left him hanging like Ornaments to Furfill
this line is alrgiht but it doenst have a ton of flow and doesnt make a lot of sense i'm going wiht 3/10
Kids a Joke,Like ur Avatar your Personality’s a Character
You couldn’t contain ya Name..If u were tha Crews manager
good line but the rhyme was a little off, understandable 4/10
L-y-r-i-c-a-l-l-y spelling out..that should teach u a Lesson
Even if u foget ya shoes kid..You could at least Check-In
This is the first personal i've seen even tho it's weak not a lot of sense and not hard punch 3/10
Tha Looks Of ya Record..Confidence isnt what u’ve only loss
Like getting Dipped on..Losing is gon b tha Lonely Cost
k started this line out pretty good but couldnt match it wiht the second line 3/10
No Crew?Ya Names Written Poorly u couldn’t Afford It
Lyrics Damaging ya Coslty..like home Owners paying Mortgage
best line u had rhyme was a little off but i go wiht 5/10
that makes 18/50
Decimals HeatRate Is Critical And He Just Failed The Physical..
Worried About Facing, Being a Vitcim To A Miracle..
k good overall idea but what the hell with the miracle thing? you say you're a miracle, that doesnt rhyme wiht physical but 4/10
You’re Pitiful, Got It ‘Locked’ Down, But I Cut All-The-‘Keys’ ..
This Battles Cat And Mouse And I’ve Hid All-The-Cheese..
locked downthing was ok cat mouse thing no , oh shit you didn't hide the cheese did you, not hard enoguh 3/10
And-Your-Steeze Is Just ‘Wrong’ Like Someone ‘Bumming-A-Dyke’..
Cuz you’ve Took So Many ‘Licks’ That You Cum-On-Your-Mic..
this line was alrgiht best one so far but it could have been better 3/10
I Summoned-A-Fight Wit My Saber Like Vader I’m Ya Father..
My Punches Loosen More Teeth Than Chocolate Mixed With Tartar..
best line easily best line 5/10
For Starters I’m The ‘Cookie Monster’ Taking All Ya ‘Dough’..
Killed So Many ‘Lines’ When I Sneeze, I Try Not To Snow..
that line was too too weak no effect at all 2/10
But i Alwayz Blow. Persitin Circumcesion Verbally on This Infant..
ya Spits are Nursery.U Rep It But u Aint Lethal Or Got Visions..
that one was pretty damn weak 3/10
thats 20/60
that sets decimal wiht a better score he got my vote
now i just took a hell of a lot of tiem for that so atleast go vote on my battle
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