here's tha breakdown:

Brethren - liked the rhyme sceme, punches were aight, best line:

"You chose-to-duel, and you can't-correct-it, like a stroke-till-drool,
Man-don't-tempt-it, "Your-flows-my-fuel", but if I bite your verse, I'd go anorexic,"

if you came like this the whole way through... you might have gotten my vote, but you fell off right after that... the rest weren't really punches, and nothin special. You got potential though


Token -

witty verse, liked this one:
"Heavy weight my ass.. I'll remove the weight off your chest
I'll handcuff your verse just so you'll give it arrest"

LOL Toke takes this for better punches & originality

but Breth you got some skillz man, no beef

pz

yall hit my shit up with Rappad w/ an honest vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105445